The music made me think of island music. You had some really nice shots it there that fit the music. It sounds like the audio at the end just cuts off abruptly, perhaps you could have faded it out?
A quick and nice compilation of footage that does get the message of peacefulness across, though the inclusion of the text overview gave an almost advertisement feel at parts.
The biggest downfall to your video is the orientation and the abrupt end. Always ease into the ending and if for some reason you need it to be abrupt, end it clearly, cleanly and with some titles at the end. Otherwise, it seems like a mistake.
Great shots! My only critique would be that I would have shot horizontally.
ReplyDeleteI noticed the nice continuous shots taken. Nice choice of music
ReplyDeleteThe video was good and the music went along with the peaceful, relaxed emotion.
ReplyDeleteGood shots on the water! It showed the peacefulness as the light hit the hit the ripples.
ReplyDeletei liked the added text that kept appearing, it was kind of like watching an ad for a peaceful get away. I felt like it ended a little abruptly.
ReplyDeleteThe music made me think of island music. You had some really nice shots it there that fit the music. It sounds like the audio at the end just cuts off abruptly, perhaps you could have faded it out?
ReplyDeletei thought your music really complemented the emotion you achieved. And the only thing i would have changed is maybe more camera views
ReplyDeleteA quick and nice compilation of footage that does get the message of peacefulness across, though the inclusion of the text overview gave an almost advertisement feel at parts.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your video because the music, colors and movements went along well with the emotion you were trying to display.
ReplyDeleteThe biggest downfall to your video is the orientation and the abrupt end. Always ease into the ending and if for some reason you need it to be abrupt, end it clearly, cleanly and with some titles at the end. Otherwise, it seems like a mistake.
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